HELLBOUND:The Graphic Novel.

[phantoma]

Originally Posted by HBA

At least he was given retired member status.

I know, that sometime the reconition we want, isn't the recongition we deserve, but that can be the fuel which makes us stronger.

Which takes me to tell this tale, of a moderator known as HELLBOUND...

Hellbound was widely known and was one of the few members to witness the rise of bwhacks. He help'd with want he could and became a respected and admired member, his opinion was a times the word of god and had the power to change the focus of a conversation or even the opinions of a forum.

Such power, created jealously. From minor, pitiful users to higher elder staff members. Old men that knew how their crippling power would be gone by such influence, men that had taken this once emerging site to ruin. This would be his downfall, his oblivion, and the world would be there witness to it. To show how men can be silenced if they follow their passions, if they follow their dreams. Hellbound continued doing his tasks and he did them well, showing no mercy to users who would violate its rules. That was until the old man found his satisfaction, not in this site, but in his pants.

This weaken the old man's judgement and corrupted his mind. The site was an intellectual whore house, with no control or no order. HELLBOUND took notice and formed a small group to take control and bring peace and order to the site. Together, they took dont the old man's boy-whore and restored the site to its former glory. Although this was not without sacrifice, his group was torn apart. Some where forced to retire, others went willing in hope of buying some time for hellbound to do his coup.

But the old man found out of his plan and quickly he was able to take down HELLBOUND and his gang. However, HELLBOUND was still strong and now he was also angry. He swore by the grave of TUPAC, his ghetto eagle-warrior-gangsta blood, and his sacred CRUNK juice that the old man and his boy-whore would pay.

VENGEANCE WAS HIS AND NO ONE ELSE'S...

[Super]

Some how I think a sean jean shirt, an uzi, and a baseball bat would fit a lot better into that image.

[Xthar]

i lawled

[phantoma]

Dont be too shy to ask me any questions on this mythical version of HELLBOUND...

[Otaku]

lmao

phantoma you have a lot of free time

[phantoma]

Originally Posted by Otaku

lmao

phantoma you have a lot of free time

Not really, but i do happen to do this stuff very quickly. This one took me half an hour to do.

[Ctark]

wow, should of asked you to write a short story for me. lol

really good job, and keep it up.

[JLTucker]

Phantoma, it would be awesome if the correct words were used and the grammar was fixed. Example: "you're" instead of "your". That was some constructive criticism. Otherwise, good job.

Here are some fixes for you. I am not flaming you but you really need to work on your grammar. Corrections are highlighted in green and are placed inside parenthesis.

Originally Posted by phantoma

Hellbound was widely known and was one of the few members to witness the rise of bwhacks. He help'd (helped) with want (what) he could and became a respected and admired member, (.) his (His) opinion was a (at) times the word of god and had the power to change the focus of a conversation or even the opinions of a forum.

Such power, created jealously. From minor, pitiful users to higher elder staff members. Old men that knew how their crippling power would be gone by such influence, men that had taken this once emerging site to ruin. This would be his downfall, his oblivion, and the world would be there witness to it (be there to witness it?). To show how men can be silenced if they follow their passions, if they follow their dreams. Hellbound continued doing his tasks and he did them well, showing no mercy to users who would violate its rules. That was until the old man found his satisfaction, not in this site, but in his pants.

This weaken (weakened) the old man's judgement and corrupted his mind. The site was an intellectual whore house, with no control or (and) no order. HELLBOUND took notice and formed a small group to take control and bring peace and order to the site. Together, they took dont (down) the old man's boy-whore and restored the site to its former glory. Although this was not without sacrifice, his group was torn apart. Some where (were) forced to retire, others went willing (willingly) in hope of buying some time for hellbound to do his coup.

But the old man found out of (about) his plan and quickly he was able to take down HELLBOUND and his gang. However, HELLBOUND was still strong and now he was also angry. He swore by the grave of TUPAC, his ghetto eagle-warrior-gangsta blood, and his sacred CRUNK juice that the old man and his boy-whore would pay.

VENGEANCE WAS HIS AND NO ONE ELSE'S...

[phantoma]

Originally Posted by JLTucker

Phantoma, it would be awesome if the correct words were used and the grammar was fixed. Example: "you're" instead of "your". That was some constructive criticism. Otherwise, good job.

Here are some fixes for you. I am not flaming you but you really need to work on your grammar. Corrections are highlighted in green and are placed inside parenthesis.

um, ok thanx. I didn't have to time nor the energy to correct everything, or even read over it. I was just glad to be done with it. Again, thanx doing the work of correcting that post. However, as long as none of it affected the context of the story, it an acceptable mistake.

But what i care about most is your option of the art and the HELLBOUND character vs the real user?

[JLTucker]

I am sorry, but those mistakes are hardly acceptable. It was extremely difficult to figure out what the hell you were talking about.

About the depiction of hellbound: I was unaware of hellbound's fascination of guns and that he owned assault rifles. I do not recall reading a single post with him mentioning his desire to reign terror. I believe that the comic character is a misrepresentation of the real hellbound.

[Otaku]

It is not intended as a real representation of him.

[JLTucker]

He asked for my opinion of the comic character versus the real hellbound. I did just that.

[Otaku]

Sorry. The word misrepresentation made me post it.</